An ode: to the one that was with me for years
Posted by sarah on 30 Oct 2006 | Tagged as: life
My heart lept with an excitement
as I reached his place
And my steps felt heavy
with the stench of the romance
I had travelled long many times to
meet him
But today, I could not wait long
to see him
I took the stairs to reach the door
and he was waiting to gently usher me in
I felt the nervousness of
the first time experience
He smiled as my eyes roamed around to see
all neatly placed as i peered thru my hair
He unburdened my hands off the card i got him
and walked me to be comfortable on a chair
My nervousness grew
as I placed myself there
He had an excited haste, came closer
and leaned over reclining my chair
He gazed into me
and I gazed at him
My face showed all and my eyes grew
He spoke nice and assured it will be fine
He approached so much nearer
I lay my head back and my eyes went dim
I opened my mouth slowly
and closed my eyes for him
I could not explain the feeling in me
The smell was all so close and intense
I have to admit that
Between his hands and me there was no fence
It was my first time
I watched and sensed him moving
Then, I felt the prick
I felt the intense pain
I struggled at the ache
He knew I was scared
Yet he, his passion wanted it
and so he continued his dare
Tears rolled down my cheeks
He looked and said it will be over soon
He continued and I asked him to stop a while
He took himself back and allowed my tears to be gone
Coaxing me, he was on me again
I laid there, taking it without a doubt
And then, the push and a pull and the pressure
It was out!
He was relieved and I lay there to feel fine
we were happy, yes, it’s the truth
For he had almost lost his temper
for the want of a tooth!
I miss my tooth- the one that was with me for years!
written in pain….
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on 30 Oct 2006 at 8:29 pm 1.rocksea said …
in my dads place we had a doctor, he was not a dentist but once i was taken to him for my loose-n-paining tooth. he checked my mouth, cracked some jokes and then told us that we can go. i stood there wondering why he told that without plucking my tooth. then only he showed the tooth which he had stealthly plucked while talking to me! still remember it like a wonder hehe.
love your poem sarah. you have metaphorized your tooth plucking to a painful love making
on 30 Oct 2006 at 8:56 pm 2.sarah said …
Interesting to know. Oh I had loose paining tooth once. Did not take me to the dentist. Just made me sit beside my brother. One hard blow from him ( acidentally) and I could not find that teeth again! It was lost wihtout trace or pain. haha… we ended up laughing. The wonder part? Well, where did that teeth go!!!!?
on 30 Oct 2006 at 10:04 pm 3.rocksea said …
and there was the boy who tied a long string to his tooth and tied the other end to the door knob. he didnt notice that the door opened inwards.. he ended up loosing more than what was asked for
on 13 Nov 2006 at 12:43 am 4.MANU said …
Now i remember how trickly i pulled my son’s teeth.. by telling stories… tying thread on it…..like that. thank you for giving nostalgic feelings….
on 16 Nov 2006 at 2:14 pm 5.sarah said …
sure Manu!
you remind me of how my papa used to trickly pull out my tooth using a thread. i used to almost sleep in his sweet talks adn then “thock” there comes out the teeth, hanging like a white pearl on a blood stained thread! hehe
on 17 Nov 2006 at 11:09 am 6.rocksea said …
hehe. i got these as forward today:
If dentists make films, the title of the movies will be -
*Daant ho na ho!
*Jaanam brush karo!!
*Aa ab daant clean karen!!!
*Kabhi teeth kabhi gum!!!!
*Humara daant aapke paas hai!!!!!
I think the last one is so true w.r.to the poem
on 24 Nov 2006 at 5:16 pm 7.Geetha said …
Beautifully written, sarah!
on 28 Nov 2006 at 8:24 pm 8.sarah said …
hehe, true Roxy dear. That guy took my tooth! Wwwwaahhh! :p
Thanks Geetha
on 14 Dec 2006 at 8:41 pm 9.shilpa said …
he hee…hey didz this onez too gud !
on 17 Dec 2006 at 5:36 pm 10.Sibish said …
hey… good one…
on 27 Dec 2006 at 8:37 pm 11.Rajani said …
hey, this was written by sarah???
on 28 Dec 2006 at 10:13 am 12.rocksea said …
hah rajani, that was written by sarah
on 17 Jan 2007 at 12:15 am 13.william said …
just remembered u Roxy….very nicely written….
on 12 Apr 2007 at 7:43 pm 14.ബെന്നി::benny said …
റോക്സിയേ, എവിടെപ്പോയി മലയാളം ബ്ലോഗ്?
on 23 Apr 2007 at 8:06 pm 15.bijoy said …
Nice post, its a really cool blog that you have here, keep up the good work, will be back.
Warm Regards
Biby Cletus -
on 18 Dec 2007 at 12:38 pm 16.Sarav said …
Yeah!! I could see how painful it could be!!
Very nice!!